My New Lyrics

Matt986 · Tadpole Joined: 24 Aug 2002 Posts: 16 Location: ct, usa

The song is called let me in. Let me know what you think of it.

I met you last summer
At the corner of 5th and Main Street.
Your eyes were beautiful.
I walked up to you
And your golden blonde hair
I needed a closer look.
The sky was clrystal clear
Like your smile when I came near
That's how I met you

*Chorus*
Well it turns out that
Life threw a curve ball at me
I thought you were everything
I needed you to be.
But I was wrong,
I was wrong.

I got to know you
In a little over a month or two
I started to trust you.
I started to realize
That I thought I loved you
I was mesmorized.
You had me to yourself
Untill you told me the news
Told me the news

*Chorus*

You said your dad left you
You were afraid of commitment,
That you couldn't trust me.
You told me you were scared
That I would forget you.
You started to cry.
You said it was something
You had to get through on your own.
You couldn't let me in.

*Bridge*

I tried and tried to understand
To make you see that
I am a man
I would never run
I would never hide
And You Said I Lied!

How could I be like this.
Be with somebody like you
You wouldnt let me in.
Now what should I do?

Well, that's it. About 6 hours work to get it right, so please, tell me the truth. Should I roll with it?

McGillman · Posted: Thu Oct 17, 2002 8:14 pm Post subject: My New Lyrics

Go for it

cowboy · Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 7:23 pm Post subject: My New Lyrics

It tells a story, it is not "dated", and it seems smooth. Put it to music and do it....

Cowboy

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" I've always been crazy but it kept me from going insane"

lostartmusic · Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 8:18 am Post subject: My New Lyrics

I like it. Really good lyrics.
Can't wait to hear some music for it!!
If your interested, my group has just posted
2 new songs on mp3.

here is the url blah blah blah

SWTshell6 · Posted: Tue Feb 11, 2003 7:13 pm Post subject: Awesome!

I really like your lyrics! If you do put it to music, will there be any way that I can hear it?? Smile